http://landofthekwt.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] landofthekwt.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] luxken27 2009-02-13 04:45 am (UTC)

Interesting. The original and expanded version both have their good points. The expanded version tells us more about the regrets that each has. The original made the transferred regret have a sharper focus because of its brevity.
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