I DID comment on that one, and two others I had read in that same sitting, and you wrote me back and told me that was the one you had expanded into "Fleeting." So, I know where you started from and what it has evolved into to some extent, and I have read some of your thoughts on it.

LOL, well, feel free to comment whenever you read even just a chapter of it - the chapters are meant to be able to stand on their own, after all. That's funny, that you've kinda read all around it but not straight through :P

I look forward to your thoughts when you have the chance to sit down with it 'properly'!