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psyco_chick32 ([personal profile] psyco_chick32) wrote in [personal profile] luxken27 2009-04-28 03:26 pm (UTC)

Fabulous use of lyrics - I loved the word usage in this piece ("groused" stuck out to me especially, LOL - It's such a Sesshoumaru-esque word!).

Just one thing I caught (*cringe* Sorry): "You see it to" --> "too"?
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