I loved the word usage in this piece ("groused" stuck out to me especially, LOL - It's such a Sesshoumaru-esque word!).

LOL, its a word I use often with him, being so dry witted and sarcastic on the inside :P He definitely makes me pick up my vocabulary.

I remember writing this piece, actually (two weeks ago - the only one to enter the contest on time, LOL) and it was one of those good nights, when the words seem to flow from your fingertips in exactly the right form. I didn't even really care that I was writing in two unfamiliar genres.

I need nights like that more often, LOL.

I might yet write the original idea I had in mind. I love the simplicity of the song and the light notes of it, even though the lyrics are so damn depressing.

And yeah, your correction is correct :P