Gosh, I don't know where to start with my review! Loved the chapter, though, as always. The length of it was most appreciated, but I don't think you could cover such a subject as you took on in this chapter without making it longer. As for the subject of this chapter, you've brought back some memories for me. I just hope Kagome makes better choices than I did. :-) The ride through their emotions was intense, I have to say. And I just wanted to reach out and slap an Inuyasha! What a dumb***! What the hell did he think would happen? That she'd come running back into his arms, crying and bemoaning. Oh please! And Sango being the one to give the comfort and advice? That was a twist, but a good one.

As for Sesshoumaru in this one, I don't know really what to say. Everything he's been working for is finally coming into fruitition, but yet he's beginning to realize what he's lost...or never really had...or had but didn't cherish? Gah! I'm lost. Just like he is... Perhaps the phrase of "if you love it, let it go..." suits him as well?

Sorry this review is so unorganized, but my thoughts are flying all over the chapter. I know I'll remember something else I wanted to comment on deep in the night and it'll wake me up until I go and do it. SO, I'll probably check in again later.

LC