I'm really glad this came through for you - that was what I was going for, exactly.
Hey, we're still on the same brain wavelength, remember? :D

Sango has so many different facets to her personality, and sometimes those strong ones can work against her.
She really is her own worst enemy sometimes. I always keep this in mind when I write dark!Sango and it usually comes out quite nicely.

I didn't want to turn Kuranousuke into a monster, just because that would've suited my purposes, when in the anime he's gentle in his persistence.
Outwardly, yes. But it's this kind of persistence which works on Sango like nothing direct and physical ever could. Imagine what she's going through now?

Then again, monster!Kuranosuke would be something interesting to explore... Thanks for the plot bunneh! >:D

The next piece I have in mind actually utilizes him even further, so we'll see if you still feel this way after reading that, LOL.
*claps hands together eagerly* I'll still love him even if he doesn't get the girl in this story (he doesn't ever).

I have my fingers crossed that this means the muses are allowing me to stutter back to life, LOL.
Teh muses are generous to the true believers *snorks*