Yep, I loved it, even more in it's 'complete' form. You style is definitely made for longer chapters.
But finally, in this version, I don't really know what to think about all this... is he not being a little unjust to her too? Is it his regrets haunting him, hurting him to the core, or is it really all Kagome's fault to begin with?
Hmmmm... food for thoughts. I love it. A tortured Sesshomaru is definitely beleivebable, in the way that you tend to write him. He suppresses his emotions most of the time, so when they are so strong that they are unbearable, he can't cope, and then they litterally eat him alive.
That's a very realistic interpretation of his character. He'll have to grow up a little though, because that's definitely a façade that won't deceive Kagome. ;)
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
Ahem.
Yep, I loved it, even more in it's 'complete' form. You style is definitely made for longer chapters.
But finally, in this version, I don't really know what to think about all this... is he not being a little unjust to her too? Is it his regrets haunting him, hurting him to the core, or is it really all Kagome's fault to begin with?
Hmmmm... food for thoughts. I love it. A tortured Sesshomaru is definitely beleivebable, in the way that you tend to write him. He suppresses his emotions most of the time, so when they are so strong that they are unbearable, he can't cope, and then they litterally eat him alive.
That's a very realistic interpretation of his character. He'll have to grow up a little though, because that's definitely a façade that won't deceive Kagome. ;)
Take care my friend.
Dewa mata