That's not what I meant, actually - I just made a post with a few of the reviews I've received that concern me, far more than they probably should. You - and most everyone who has replied here - are on the right track. You're not supposed to trust Inuyasha. You're supposed to question his motives, and feel uneasy about whether or not he's truly a villain of the piece. That's *exactly* what I've been striving for in the piece, and exactly the reason why there hasn't been a chapter from his perspective - the challenge has been using unreliable narrators and having the reader draw their own conclusions about the key players.
No, my concern is with how people reacted to *Kagome* here.
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No, my concern is with how people reacted to *Kagome* here.