From some reason, the LJ link is not working for me. :( So I read it on MM.org, but I don't like reviewing on that site, so here I am.
Anywho, I really loved the way you handled the entire build up in this chapter. I hadn't even realized how much I'd learned about Miroku's character until the end, and everything made sense that much more with those developments. The numbness that Sango felt is obvious and well-done - and something that everyone (except a very lucky few) that reads can identify with. She had very real reactions.
And thank you so much for not making the lemon classy and not at all squick-worthy. I really had no fear of that from you, but I feel that way every time I read a well done lemon. :D
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Anywho, I really loved the way you handled the entire build up in this chapter. I hadn't even realized how much I'd learned about Miroku's character until the end, and everything made sense that much more with those developments. The numbness that Sango felt is obvious and well-done - and something that everyone (except a very lucky few) that reads can identify with. She had very real reactions.
And thank you so much for not making the lemon classy and not at all squick-worthy. I really had no fear of that from you, but I feel that way every time I read a well done lemon. :D