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The Art of Choosing a Title
(post title totally swiped from the MeFi thread)
Because I've had recent interesting discussions on the matter, here's an article about how to choose a title for your story/novel/series. Even if you don't agree with the rules, it makes for good fodder for the brain. I tend to go for the opaque, myself...maybe that's another one of my problems, LOL.
Because I've had recent interesting discussions on the matter, here's an article about how to choose a title for your story/novel/series. Even if you don't agree with the rules, it makes for good fodder for the brain. I tend to go for the opaque, myself...maybe that's another one of my problems, LOL.
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I'm at the point in numbers that I often have to look carefully to make sure I'm not trying to duplicate a previously used one, though, and that sometimes means I don't really title a work what I want to call it.
One of my favorite titles for a short piece is Accidently, One Summer Afternoon. There's something neat and evocative about it. I title my photographs over at dA, and my favorite title of any pic is probably "Fist of the Firegod," a photo of a pyrocumulus cloud over a wild fire, because it looked vaguely fist shaped to me...It would probably make a good title for a fantasy novel. LOL.
I have no theory or strategy...I look at the work, and slap a title that seems fitting on it. Am I good at it? Heck if I know, but I'm not worried about it for fanfic.
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Since I've picked up the habit of writing serials (which need each piece to have a title, as well as the overall serial title), I'm much in the same boat. And I have accidentally duplicated one, but I didn't notice until long after I'd posted it. Oh, well. I'll usually try to at least get close to a word I'd like to use and then maybe make a synonym run on it to find the perfect one :P
I have no theory or strategy...I look at the work, and slap a title that seems fitting on it.
This is pretty much what I do as well, but sometimes I'll have an idea in mind first that might help direct the way I want to write a piece (most recently, "A Most Favorable Arrangement," which meant I had to write it in a higher style of prose than I'd originally intended...)
What I'm stumping on more often now is trying to write a summary. I don't really do either (titling or summary) until after I've finished writing a piece, but more often than not I can't find a good way to summarize what I've written without it sounding horribly trite or cliche. Bah!
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for example: InuYasha wants Kagome to join him in doing something she used to like. Why is she reluctant? And what does he remind her about?
One afternoon, bandits try to kidnap Kagome while she is collecting herbs. Something strange happens to her while InuYasha searches frantically for her. Who is this person who comes to her while she's unconscious?
One afternoon, Rin stumbles across something she wasn't meant to see. Why doesn't she leave? And who else was watching InuYasha and Kagome?
Comm summaries are a bit different, but I'm not very deep there:
Interesting how the same word can mean different things considering who's it's directed at.
Rin stumbles onto something she wasn't supposed to see...but is she the only voyeur?
Simple, but still mostly teasers. That's my system. I would summarize things differently if I needed a true summary, like for the last piece:
Rin accidently stumbles across InuYasha and Kagome who do not realize they are being watched while they share an intimate moment. Rin, panicked, runs off, but someone else who is watching does not pull away so quickly. (I wouldn't say more than that because I don't want my summary to spoil it.)
But I do prefer doing the teasers.
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I guess I just find summarizing a bit trite, especially if you only have 256 characters. I've been trying to think of a way to summarize the Fleeting serial, a static summary to use after its finished since, at the moment, I'm updating with the installment summaries, and I've just drawn a blank. There's too much going on to find a decent way to limit it so much...so, hmm. We'll see.
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What people want to know, I suspect, is: Who is the lead couple, if there is one, is it AU or Canon in setting, and to know a smidgeon about to expect: happy or sad, sexual situations, serious or funny.
The summary isn't a true summary; it's a place where you submit an invitation to have people come and look at your content...Rather than beat my head in, I went with something easy in the early days of my post manga stuff, and when I got positive feedback on it, I just kept it up for continuity. I do all these things on the fast fly without a lot of deep thought, so that's how I came to do it this way. It's easy for me, it signals the pertinent info, and I hope it teases people into looking. I just don't like to sweat blood over it and am lazy, so went with an easy solution.
But each of us have to figure out something that's comfy.
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Well, exactly, and the hard part is coming up with something that does that, at least for me. Summaries are the first things people read of your fic, so its the first (or second, after the title) impression.
I have so-so luck, I'd suspect, unless I just hit on something genius out of left field *shrug* I'm hoping something snappy will come to me by the time I finish Fleeting, but if not, don't be surprised to see me open a "help me summarize this fic in 256 characters or less!" thread, LOL :P