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LuxKen27 ([personal profile] luxken27) wrote2008-08-30 03:16 pm

Memento

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Pairing:  Inuyasha/Kagome
Rating: T
Inspiration:  "Say Goodbye" (C) 1996 Dave Matthews Band
Based Upon:  [livejournal.com profile] iyfic_contest Week 156 | Silver & Gold (3rd Place)

I'm sure this is a tired trope, and I'm not the first one to post an entry like this to the contest, but it was the flash of inspiration that hit me :)  This came from a combination of things -- working with last week's prompt (and ideas), another idea that's floating around in my head (which I'm hoping to turn into a piece for another contest community), and this song.  I know, I know:  DMB is so cliche.  But this song is so perfect, hitting the exact note of forbidden temptation I was hoping to convey.

The biggest problem I had with this piece?  The word length.  This week's contest had a word-limit of 250, and needless to say, that is the exact opposite of my normal writing style.  I am verbose -- I admit that loudly and proudly.  I love my lush descriptions, pointed dialogue, and angsty introspection more than anybody else, probably...so, trying to condense that down into 250 measly words was quite the challenge.

I do, however, like this idea a lot, and am contemplating turning it into a full-length oneshot.  Perhaps hone my citrus writing skills a bit?  On that note, let me just say that I hate putting a pairing label on this, because as it stands now, it could be either Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru.  I labeled it as Inuyasha, but this has the real potential to devolve into my first Sess/Kag piece (and I really, really want to write one of those...)